iesha vs. tomcat

[tomcat]

yo here i go

why you always tryin to show me up/
i guess i gotta prove that i can grow(lyrically)/
i can put this flow to rest/ i know i im not the best//
you got some big ass welts on your chest///
always actin like a man/
tryin to be like eminem/
you so stupid that you tried to put m&m's in alphabetical order/
you be so ugly that when you want to go take a bath the water jumpes out/
im gonna get a knock out//
im gonna show you what im all about//
"if david could kill goliath with a stone"/
i can kill you with just one flow alone//
why you skippin your med's??/
you just a mental case/
its the season to roast you and there is every reason to/
im gonna get to ya/
soften you up so i can finish you/
damn it aint no contest/ im just gonna outlast you/
and im gonna procastinate ya/

yo that was tough/ im just becomin a lil rough//

iesha no beef ight. good luck

[No Ties]

where the hell is Iesha's spit?

[tomcat]

she wanted me to go first, there i changed the title, shes the one who chalanged me so yea

[iesha7]

Fuck that shit/ your acting like a bitch/ you say i'm acting like a man/ oh ya like you can/ everybody knows your gay/ everybody knows by the words you say/ you always saying you getting hoes/ but who would want a person like you with all those rolls/ you say you'll me with one flow alone/ hell i'll kill you with your own/ always thinking that i'm going to be soft/ well this bullshit has gone to far/ i'm sick of letting you just fly/it's time for you to feel the pain i fell inside/ ok you say i act like Eminem/ well i rather act like Eminem then being a wannabe rapper who likes suckin' alot of dick/ oh ya this was tough,not/ i'm gonna be so hot you got to put on sun block.


this is one of my worst flows but oh well!

[tomcat]

rolls i aint got rolls r u on crack. lol me rolls lmao

[10dEnCy]

vote- iesha because most of tomcats shit was so bad i was laughing lmao
but all in all both spits were okay yall seem like yall can progress try hella hard on your next flow try and use multis and dont rhyme the same word twice !!!!!
come on yall take some time on ya shit

[tomcat]

yo alright yall said ud giv me advise when i needed it so yea. and ok ill do that thanxs x

[synical]

alright kids lets look at this battle shall we.

tomcat-more poetical than flowetical(lol) and you are improving though. if it dont sound right fix it and look in the dictionary on random pages for words to use. only use them if they make sense though. otherwise keep it comin

iesha had the upper hand on you because shes good and you're mediocre. she flipped almost everything and she got on your ass *dumb hard* but yeah iesha definately gets the win in this battle.

vote-iesha

[HOSTILE2]

"always actin like a man/
tryin to be like eminem/ "

I AINT GON SUGARCOAT SHIT 4 U DOG. I TRIED, BUT I JUS CANT MAKE THIS RHYME. I KNOW U TRYIN 2 MAKE THE LAST SYLLABLES RHYME:
"you be so ugly that when you want to go take a bath the water jumpes out/
im gonna get a knock out//"

(DONT RHYME OUT WITH OUT, OR DONT RHYME THE SAME WORD . . .EVER!!! THINK, JUST START SAYIN 2 YOSELF WORDS THAT RHYM W/ OUT, DOUBT SHOUT POUT ETC.)

TRY MAKING THE THE LAST TWO SYLLABLES RHYME NOW, CUZ THATLL MAKE IT FLOW A LIL NICER

EX: YO, LATEL U BEEN SMOOTH
BUT U STILL GOTTA IM-PROVE
GET IT
BEEN SMOOTH
IM PROVE

[tomcat]

alright thanxs ive learned alot from all ya guys

[Pex]

it looks like you lost playa but dont sweat it yo,
whatever progress you makin now is good....this line i liked a lot:

Tomcat
you so stupid that you tried to put m&m's inalphabetical order/

vote=iesha
Peace - Pex

[tomcat]

ight thanxs halla peace out